Can you guys help me with my story? - completed community service park letter
Well, I love writing, and I wanted to write a script. Heres the story and do not want to hear about my story. Please be honest.
It's called sound, air, deff. Haha, I thought it was a cool name
A rebellious teenager, Anna Young, was the court to provide community after she caught smoking weed on many occasions in his high school in Pennsylvania. As requested, that must have their service hours in the Park School for the Deaf and the incentive that if the prison will not work. After a school counselor Park, Holly McKinney, quickly caught up in the communication system of ASL. Anna makes life difficult for children who are not audible and) perceived ideal of the loss of innocence and the central value of the talent (or luck. Anna discovers that they have more in common with these children I could never return to the language of the "world" at home and in this process heartbeat Junior JJ Waters fall, quiet, calm and cold, your girlfriendENAG deaf child, everyone who likes to be friendly. At first, he loves her, that only someone who "aid" has made. But as time passes, they fall into situations in which all learn a thing or two, on the other. They speak in sign language and love in the abstract, but their relationship eventually into a deep love and reassurance, both worlds without words leaves. After a wait to hear Anna's voice at the end, he decided to undergo cochlear surgery, a procedure that is very dangerous and risky. JJ died after trying to get one. The year ends and a new mentality and a new perspective on life.
I kind of rushed the end because he at times. Is it good?
Tuesday, January 5, 2010
Completed Community Service Park Letter Can You Guys Help Me With My Story?
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6 comments:
Uh ... Where you have "very dangerous and risky" one? It is a common procedure and is usually performed in outpatient surgery. The debate over the cochlear implant is essentially ethical, nothing to do with security.
Really creative and original!
(not to the classic stories such as pom-pom blond girl falls in love with a popular athlete, but also like other athletes Blondie ... What?)
ie-Wad-i-media;)
I love the action, which could very well work just for them
mine? http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index ...
I LIKE IT. I want to know what to do with his life after the death of JJ. When you write a new chapter, please write me a message me;)
Bad title, good story. But just as his love is really blind
Sounds good. Really moving and ready. I suppose some expeience deaf? My cousin used to be almost completely deaf, he had a cochlear implant, it went very well and now its not nearly as good as anyone else. His summary was well written Vey, I hope they can take over and to a large book.
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